lunes, 27 de mayo de 2013

Emphatic task- Father of Morris

 When the first letter came, saying that the magazine liked my son's comic, I couldn't believe it, then I thought that if there  wasn't a check there wasn't really serious. That they weren't gonna publish it. But it was funny to boder him about it. After he went to the meeting, and he told me that they were publishing it, that really suprise me.
 I was and I am really proud of him, eventhough I don't show it too much, but I am! But she shouldn't be so confidence about it, he can't spend a life o a comic strip arrist, this is not a stable job, one day you are good and at the other one you are not. Maybe the next time he isn't so lucky, he should have hope, but I don't think he is gonna get anywhere... I ought to warn him about it, and I will!

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